suggestions for a bridge or revisions to my song would be awesome. So
here's the song so far
first verse:
I'm sitting here in my bed
with your face running through my head
trying to figure out where we went wrong
Ive been thinking for so long now
still trying to figure this out
Its just too hard for me to understand
Pre Chorus:
I'm frozen in the dark
with only half of my heart
the other half is in your hands
Chorus:
SO where did we fall apart
You still have my heart
I pray that you don't throw it away
Don't want our love to fly away
Want to stay with you another day
I want our sadness to wash away
So that all im left with is your love
Second verse:
How did we end up like this
I want to go back to our first kiss
memories that used to make me laugh
Sometimes i out your jacket on
when things start to go wrong
I know you'll be there to protect me every time
Pre Chorus:
Ive missed you since you've been gone
Its gotten hard to carry on
Its like a rain cloud is always over my head
( chorus would repeat again and then it would go to the bridge that
hasn't been written yet)
thoughts, comments, and ideas are needed,
please and thank you!
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